英語力ほぼゼロから留学、1年後の英語力【A+を初めて取った英作文】伊敷台英語教室

liquor pours in wine glass 追憶

英語力ほぼゼロでアメリカの高校に入学して、毎日の図書館通いで英語を猛勉強し、約1年後、日本の国語にあたるEnglish102のクラスで初めてA+を取ったエッセイ(英作文)を公開します。

少しぎこちない英語ですが、最後までお読みいただけましたら幸いです。

 

Slightly Intoxicated

It was an extraordinary sultry day when I was at the age of five.I came home from the playground and almost died of thirst.I was wandering through the kitchen for something to drink.First, I tried to drink tap water.However,my height was not high enough to reach the faucet.I called my mother for help, but she was not at home.

I gave up the idea of drinking tap water and decided to look for some other thing to drink.Finally, I found a bottle full of grape juice in the refrigerator.My eyes sparkled like a kid who found an oasis in the desert.

I quickly filled my glass with the grape juice and drank it in one gulp.After I drank it.I found out its aftertaste was a little bit. sour and dry.I wondered why I felt hotter after drinking the chilled liquid.I considered deeply what I should do and hit on a great idea.I put some sugar and ice into the glass and poured the liquid again.It turned into a tasty and full-bodied liquid.I took great pleasure in drinking it.

When I was going to drink another glass of the liquid, gradually something began to take hold of me.I noticed that I was laughing unconsciously, and I was unsteady on my legs.After I drank three glasses of the strange liquid, I fell into a deep sleep.

After a while, my mother came back and found a half bottle of wine and her little drunken kid.She was astounded at the sight of the unbelievable scene.She hastened to give me a lot of tap water to decrease the concentration of alcohol.I was finally given tap water by my mother.

After this event, I learned that there was a magic liquid in the world.
However, strangely enough, I never saw the magic liquid again in my house.

  • slightly(少しばかり)
  • intoxicated(酔った)
  • extraordinary(異常に)
  • sultry(むし暑い)
  • tap water(水道水)
  • faucet(蛇口)
  • aftertaste(後味)
  • full-bodied(濃厚な)
  • gradually(徐々に)
  • unconsciously(無意識に)
  • unsteady(ふらふらする)
  • astounded(びっくり仰天して)
  • hasten(急ぐ)
  • concentration(濃度)
このエッセーのテーマは「imply(ほのめかす)」で、読者に徐々に何かを気付かせる(ぶどうジュース→ワイン)というものでした。
最後まで読んでいただき有難うございました。

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